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‘Chasing Humanity’ (fiction): Character profile: Tobias

27 Aug

The world is different, human beings have changed and in a last ditch effort to hold on to what was once ‘normal’ human civilisation, an exodus of like-minded people has occurred. In the beginning only the wealthy few made the trek but eventually the new colonies were substantial enough to enable thousands more to leave their home countries and head to the only landmass on Earth still untouched by human hands: Antarctica.

Our story begins with Tobias, a young man who has spent the past few years of his life (and all of his savings) gaining invaluable skills for tending the habitat that keeps the elements at bay and allows the people of the domed city of Loam to live something approaching a normal life.

The Antarctic winter has set in and the lighting employed to battle the endless dark is limited to just a few hours a day. UV lamps pour out just enough to keep plants alive and the dome’s environmental controls are straining just to keep the temperature inside above freezing.

Icy winds of -50°C howl through the endless night outside the dome, and yet at times Tobius would rather take his chances outside if it meant he could get away from his dad’s relentless lecturing.

Cabin fever is setting in but the only way to get out the house is to go to ‘Mike’s Place’; an entertainment center near Tobias’s home, and that costs credits that Tobias just doesn’t have. Blagging his way through free coffees one repair job at a time Tobias longs for something different, a break from the monotony.

His wish is about to be granted in a way he never would have expected, Tobias’s time in Loam is running to an end and he has no idea. For now he’ll settle for a cup of coffee with the girl who makes his days worthwhile: Anyanka.

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Let me know what you think in the comments below, as promised there is much more to come (though I’ll do all I can to keep spoilers to a minimum). ‘Chasing Humanity’ should be ready sometime after Christmas, but if I get a bit of extra free time who knows it could be sooner. Please subscribe to find out more about this book or to see my hints and tips about writing.

Today’s tip: don’t take the easy route now, you’ll just give yourself more work later. Before running on to the next chapter of writing, review what you just wrote, make sure it’s formatted correctly, reads easily, and is as free from grammatical errors and spelling mistakes as you can manage. Also if you intend to publish on kindle don’t bother about page run over, in fact save your writing in html format and when writing view as ‘web page’ that way you remove the temptation to move paragraphs to a new page etc.

Thanks for reading, I welcome any comments and I’ll have some more content from ‘Chasing Humanity’ to share very soon. Cheers, John

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